✨ tweety ✨’s Reviews > The Crown of Moonlight > Status Update
✨ tweety ✨
is 48% done
for when I write a review...
mostly every chapter is basically rinse and repeat:
- trip is interrupted by eating, sleeping or flora asking about the lore or one of the 'monsters' attacks them
- both want to jump the other but their mind says NOOoOO I CaNNOT They're MY Enemy!!
- there are no subplots, no recurring secondary characters, it's all flat as a board
- ah and they have no chemistry
— Nov 23, 2025 02:34PM
mostly every chapter is basically rinse and repeat:
- trip is interrupted by eating, sleeping or flora asking about the lore or one of the 'monsters' attacks them
- both want to jump the other but their mind says NOOoOO I CaNNOT They're MY Enemy!!
- there are no subplots, no recurring secondary characters, it's all flat as a board
- ah and they have no chemistry
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✨ tweety ✨’s Previous Updates
✨ tweety ✨
is 40% done
chat, I was wrong. it keeps being boring :( I don't know if I should stop reading and put it behind me or give myself a chance to finish it. I'm almost halfway but i also can't torture myself with something I am not enjoying
— Nov 23, 2025 06:36AM
✨ tweety ✨
is 29% done
I enter editor mode sorry. This whole chapter 16 could've been from flora's pov. Writing it from chyr's made is passive and detached. It makes the reader become even more less invested in what is happening. And in short, makes me want to stop reading.
— Nov 22, 2025 12:50AM
✨ tweety ✨
is 27% done
ok, I've read enough and the verdict is that so far, i'm bored. the story is moving at a snail's pace and the mcs haven't showed much personality for me to care about them and their story. they seem too perfect and they are getting along too quickly!! bro nooo you should be enemies. I'm also confused about the sides
— Nov 21, 2025 01:08PM
✨ tweety ✨
is 6% done
can't stop laughing at CULODUR bc they are two words in Italian and they mean backside (culo) and hard/tight (duro) so CULODUR in Italian would mean hard... ass basically lmao
— Nov 21, 2025 03:11AM
