Marl’s Reviews > Barn Gothic: Three Generations and the Death of the Family Dairy Farm > Status Update

This memoir is like. 5-10 minute chapters of vaguely chronological vignettes about random points in this guy's life growing up. I think it needs a much stronger center line.
Also, it's very obvious that neither he nor his father ever kept a journal or anything to reference. Lots of I don't know what my dad felt like about x at the time" or "I can't remember what I felt like/said to my father after y" like okay -_-.