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I'm sure its pedantic but her slipping between the different forms of English between characters is annoying. Its sloppy and confirms my suspicion that this doesnt have an editor

What's with the constant music name drops? Am I supposed to be impressed with your personal tastes or is it supposed to add to the mood? You cant write on your own without giving us a musical Playlist to enhance this fucking shitshow?

I need you to know that "clench" is in here 61 times and the book is less than 390 pages. I think the FMC may have a medical condition

"“Always so nice and wet for me,”"

Literally the second time he has ever touched her in his life but ok

(I really fucking hate this book)

“"Made by the finest chemists in Israel""

Oh this must have been made many years ago which explains the dialog- oh my god its from 2024? What the fuck is wrong with this person

"Loki has gone for a gourmet burger and chunky chips, or, as they're called here, fries. Of course, I reach over and grab one, I mean, chips are life!"

I gave myself an injury rolling my eyes as hard as I did. What the fuck is this fucking book

I must know if Rosa Lee was aiming to make the FMC fucking insufferable or if it was an accident

So obnoxious

I think I got got by tiktok again. 7 pages in and she is already incredibly obnoxious. I think supposed to find her funny and quirky and relatable? I want to punch her.