Kai (CuriousCompass)’s Reviews > Better in Black > Status Update

1st Story: this is the issue with adding too many side adventures or short stories in a series....you have to make it exciting and feel like an event but then you don't have time to develop it properly...like Will getting amnesia would get a much larger reaction out of Tessa than this but I guess I like that she kept her head. Anticlimactic.