Ray Ellis’s Reviews > The Spear Cuts Through Water > Status Update
Ray Ellis
is 64% done
Day 3 - Empress' POV. A much shorter and tighter narrative with none of that faffing in the theatre.
— Jan 03, 2026 11:51PM
Like flag
Ray’s Previous Updates
Ray Ellis
is 54% done
Day 2 - The road trip becomes a river trip, with a twist at the end.
— Jan 03, 2026 02:44AM
Ray Ellis
is 36% done
Day 1 - A bit more linear storytelling and world building - still some purple prose but not as much.
— Jan 02, 2026 06:27AM
