Ray Ellis’s Reviews > The Spear Cuts Through Water > Status Update

After

Day 5 - the Third Terror

Day 3 - Empress' POV. A much shorter and tighter narrative with none of that faffing in the theatre.

Day 2 - The road trip becomes a river trip, with a twist at the end.

Day 1 - A bit more linear storytelling and world building - still some purple prose but not as much.

Before - so far it's just dull and confusing