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cali
is 28% done
The writing is terrible. It’s written so poorly - characterisation where?
The scenes develop into the most nonsensical path…
I have left several notes in my ebook with “wtf is going on.”
Why are you acting like that? Why did you just do that?
Every chapter is plagued with telling 🥲
— Jan 04, 2026 06:33PM
The scenes develop into the most nonsensical path…
I have left several notes in my ebook with “wtf is going on.”
Why are you acting like that? Why did you just do that?
Every chapter is plagued with telling 🥲
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cali
is 56% done
I’ve not touched any book for 3 days because I’m dreading resuming this…
If this wasn’t for book club, I would’ve DNFed this by now
— Jan 07, 2026 02:00PM
If this wasn’t for book club, I would’ve DNFed this by now
cali
is 42% done
I would love if the authors trusted us to infer some of the symbolism instead of immediately explaining what something connotes.
— Jan 04, 2026 07:22PM
cali
is 31% done
What. The. Fuck. Is. The. Point.
So much of this book is aimless. Pointless. There is no motivation. It’s just walking around the woods. WHAT IS THE GOAL
— Jan 04, 2026 06:44PM
So much of this book is aimless. Pointless. There is no motivation. It’s just walking around the woods. WHAT IS THE GOAL
cali
is 21% done
I’m getting frustrated reading this. I don’t feel I’ve learnt anything new about this world since Chapter 2. For me, it’s boring to read non stop action. I don’t care about these people. I don’t understand their world, and what drives them to survive.
Clearly, I prefer political fantasies over this.
I want the world to develop more and it’s going nowhere.
— Jan 04, 2026 06:03PM
Clearly, I prefer political fantasies over this.
I want the world to develop more and it’s going nowhere.
cali
is 14% done
- the world hasn’t been set up enough for me to be rooting for any of these champions OR feel invested in the FMC’s (Ferris) family past
- this book is in first person and annoyingly, she has to remind us in every chapter that she’s Not Like Other Girls
This book is making me feel empty. I don’t care how they go in the woods. I hardly understand how they live… none of it is clear
— Jan 03, 2026 12:52PM
- this book is in first person and annoyingly, she has to remind us in every chapter that she’s Not Like Other Girls
This book is making me feel empty. I don’t care how they go in the woods. I hardly understand how they live… none of it is clear
cali
is 10% done
ngl I’m in the mood for something fast-paced so I am speed reading this faster than usual
— Jan 03, 2026 02:58AM

