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"The pills weren't strong enough to block my seed." I fucking hate you.
— Jan 18, 2017 08:19AM
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"Afterward, he sat down on the bed and began to cry." If you can't even drum up enough emotion in your own writing how is the reader supposed to care or empathize or feel sorry for the characters? Christian crying is given the same attention as him brushing his teeth, wtf.
— Jan 18, 2017 06:29AM
