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What the hell is this formatting? Each chapter says “EVERETT” but then at the end it randomly jumps POVs to the other MC, but it doesn’t have his name. It just changes to italics. Why title the chapters with Everett’s name if you don’t do the same for the other MC. No need to italicize an entire section of the book. Just label it so we know the POV changed. It’s so weird and unnecessary.
Jan 12, 2026 03:15PM
The Guy in the Window

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