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Audrey
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Flashback again.
Sexy time That Night(tm) and I just do not care for either of them. Also it’s too much on the terms of endearments… trouble, sunshine, baby, baby, baby… no sorry you haven’t earned the right to use that and definitely not so many times in the same scene. Jfc
— Jan 15, 2026 06:45AM
Sexy time That Night(tm) and I just do not care for either of them. Also it’s too much on the terms of endearments… trouble, sunshine, baby, baby, baby… no sorry you haven’t earned the right to use that and definitely not so many times in the same scene. Jfc
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Audrey
is 20% done
I mean… That Night(tm), Lance’s inner turmoil is a little painful. But it doesn’t change that it’s shitty, communicate maybe instead of disappearing?
Also… how many times are they going to say they have the same eye color and now it’s like you copied my eyes so you can truly see me? Or whatever?
— Jan 15, 2026 07:00AM
Also… how many times are they going to say they have the same eye color and now it’s like you copied my eyes so you can truly see me? Or whatever?
Audrey
is 16% done
See my problem is that if you give me dirty talk and I don’t care about/love the characters yet then it’s not doing it for me
they’re having phone sex, it’s still the same Pride night. they already had two encounters (the glory hole + the interrupted bj at the party).
We had a couple of flashback chapters of That Night(tm) in college but otherwise it’s just them lusting for each other in the present…
— Jan 15, 2026 06:24AM
they’re having phone sex, it’s still the same Pride night. they already had two encounters (the glory hole + the interrupted bj at the party).
We had a couple of flashback chapters of That Night(tm) in college but otherwise it’s just them lusting for each other in the present…
