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is 10% done
Off to a good start. However, it has committed one of my cardinal sins. In the first chapter, the MC is on the bus going to Drop In, "the charity I work for" then in chapter 3 she arrived at Drop In "the charity I work for". Does the author think that I'd forgotten that , within the space of 11 pages, that Drop In was where she worked? I hate when simple facts are repeated over and over again in books
— Jan 24, 2026 12:03PM
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