Elizabeth’s Reviews > Make My Heart Race > Status Update

Wow, she's an idiot. It's not safer for her or her baby to leave her men!

Ugh. What an idiot. 🤦🏼‍♀️

Are you kidding me!? You're going to write a breakup into this book this far in!?

He's changed? Uh, when!?

Well, I guess the polycule is complete. I really hate the way it went tho.

Ok. He comes by his grossness "honestly". Does not give me hope for him as a partner.

Why, author!? Why!?

"And if Papa had taught me anything, it was that you could be a happily married man and still impregnate women without marrying them."

Ah, sweet author. You have given yourself away. I hear you're from Australia? I love Australia! Why didn't you set the book there?

Instead you set it in a place I know very well. And you keep slipping up.

We NEVER call movers "removalists". And when I looked up the term, the first thing that comes up is Australia.

I probably should DNF because I am so not a fan of how this polycule is forming. It disgusts me that he's such a manwhore and that she's attracted to him while being in a committed polycule with two other men and that he's saying having sex with prostitutes doesn't count as not respecting the sanctity of their marriage or so many other things.

But I'm hooked and I want to know what happens. 🤦🏼‍♀️

I'm sorry, "prostitutes don't count" in terms of protecting the sanctity of marriage!?

He's so gross! And HE's going to be her solution and HUSBAND!?

Why, author, why!?

He's such an entitled prick manwhore.

I don't want to call a human a waste of space but why are we getting this douche canoe as a potential third partner? I want to hope we're getting chapters from his POV because he'll be a hero in a future book but I don't think so.