Isabella’s Reviews > Amid Clouds and Bones > Status Update

2 seconds later yeah of course they’re mates

Vane controls shadows and has wings and they keep going under and in a mountain to a castle/city underneath … ok sure whatever

I don’t know who I want her to end up with less. I am mainly indifferent towards Vane bc it doesn’t matter what side he’s on but Atakan is nothing on a nothing platter where he’s just rude but it’s passed off as attraction even though I know it’s gonna be Atakan

Vane is a block of wood I can’t tell what I’m supposed to feel about him in this situation she’s found herself in

Do they like each other or do they both desperately just want to have sex. No evidence shown for the first of the two.

If you kind of just power through and skim read the missing information kind of becomes moot

And another thing…. The first few chapters were genuinely just a countdown until the FC turned 18 so they could start their little sex games. Characters are still boring in case anyone’s wondering I do not have an open heart for this

Time jumps are never specified, so each new chapter you go into it assuming it’s the same time period, and wait until someone says out right how much times has passed. love!

Chapter 2 and the writing is still bad. Things are said before the context is said, making everything confusing. I’m shocked some of this even hit publishing

Only have finished the prologue, and so far the writing is sub par.. I find myself going back to make sense of why something was said, as though I’ve missed context, but it’s just that things are said randomly without any preamble. Just doesn’t make sense.