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Mel DG
is 30% done
Chapter 7 is Andrea pov - Dimitri’s brother. Why?? So incredibly jarring. It was pretty much all background explaining.
And so far, the 2 main characters haven’t really interacted!
— Jan 30, 2026 12:44PM
And so far, the 2 main characters haven’t really interacted!
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Mel DG
is 41% done
They’ve had public sex twice. But have only spoken maybe 10 words! The dialogue isn’t so good. So MUCH backstory explaining. Not really much action moving forward.
— Jan 30, 2026 01:19PM
Mel DG
is starting
Just realised this is going to be a Romeo & Juliet retelling.
— Jan 29, 2026 02:23AM
