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Another typo. Who’s instead of whose. Relatively common, but would be missed by a word processor.

I know Sydney is in a remote area and her phone probably wouldn’t work in the woods. Now that she’s home though, call 911! She found a man injured in the middle of the woods. He needs proper medical attention and a police report!

Now there’s a word missing an apostrophe. I know self published books don’t tend to have editors, but a proofreader might have been nice.

“His eyes revealed nothing but evil”. Ooph that’s a bad line. You’re going to tell us outright that he’s evil without telling us that he had a menacing look in his eyes or something that reveals it a little more indirectly?

There’s a typo in the dedications. As in, before page 1. I’ve never had that happen before…