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Corey
Corey is on page 113 of 307
Also I hate the main character
19 hours, 56 min ago
Revealing Eden (Save the Pearls, #1)

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Corey
Corey is on page 276 of 307
The tribe you're using the name of is indigenous to ECUADOR. The Aztec empire was confined mostly to Mexico. THIS IS MAKING ME INSANE
13 hours, 35 min ago
Revealing Eden (Save the Pearls, #1)


Corey
Corey is on page 258 of 307
Calling being a carrier of a non-fatal genetic condition having a "defective genome" is so fucking eugenicist holy fuck
13 hours, 38 min ago
Revealing Eden (Save the Pearls, #1)


Corey
Corey is on page 258 of 307
Also what if we didn't call the mixed race kid w albinism "cotton" given the extremely racially charged history of the fibre holy shit lady
13 hours, 40 min ago
Revealing Eden (Save the Pearls, #1)


Corey
Corey is on page 258 of 307
Author idk how to explain to you that two parents being carriers for one of the genes that can cause albinism in humans does not guarantee albinism 😭
13 hours, 40 min ago
Revealing Eden (Save the Pearls, #1)


Corey
Corey is on page 217 of 307
What the fuck is happening
13 hours, 59 min ago
Revealing Eden (Save the Pearls, #1)


Corey
Corey is on page 193 of 307
Anacondas are typically not this actively aggressive btw
14 hours, 7 min ago
Revealing Eden (Save the Pearls, #1)


Corey
Corey is on page 189 of 307
The listing the scientific name of every species that gets mentioned thing is super fucking annoying
14 hours, 8 min ago
Revealing Eden (Save the Pearls, #1)


Corey
Corey is on page 138 of 307
The dystopia is so annoying bc the author keeps mentioning weird fucked up concepts and then Not Expanding on them

Like girl what the fuck is a "mandatory death experience"

Stop doing racism never before conceived of and explain that shit
14 hours, 56 min ago
Revealing Eden (Save the Pearls, #1)


Corey
Corey is on page 118 of 307
I know I'm mostly commenting on mundane bullshit things and not the extremely horrific and overt racism but I'm gonna keep doing that and say this: Jaguars don't purr
19 hours, 50 min ago
Revealing Eden (Save the Pearls, #1)


Corey
Corey is on page 102 of 307
"They think you're *El Tigre*, the Jaguar man. Imagine, the long awaited Aztec God"

Author in the meanest way possible, and doing exactly 0 research: you're wrong

1. This tribe is Ecuadorean, the Aztec empire did not extend to Ecuador
2. That means "the tiger"
3. Aztec god names aren't typically in Spanish
4. Jaguar in Spanish is... Jaguar
20 hours, 5 min ago
Revealing Eden (Save the Pearls, #1)


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