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While the prose is not bad, there's a lot of filter verbs and moments of telling where sensory details could've strengthen it.

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You went too far, Skedi.

— 5 hours, 54 min ago

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I do wonder if Skedi is one of the gods who survived the war and got diminutive/reincarnated as another god.

— Feb 06, 2026 01:33PM

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They lost the rest of the group!?

— Feb 06, 2026 10:09AM

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Kissen is a 30-something-year-old woman yet one of her internal thought moments just sounded like a teenage girl.

— Feb 06, 2026 05:27AM

Nicholas Perez is on page 101 of 304

"That's an interesting fuck you give about it."
Damn, Kissen.

— Feb 05, 2026 01:35PM

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Everyone's met up. Let's go!

— Feb 05, 2026 10:27AM

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— Feb 05, 2026 05:09AM

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I wonder if Inara has somehow become Skedi's shrine, in some way?

— Feb 04, 2026 01:32PM

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Not sure I trust Arren.

— Feb 04, 2026 10:25AM

Nicholas Perez is on page 38 of 304

Two interesting themes at play here: the dangers of religious fundamentalism, but also the suppression of religious freedom.

— Feb 04, 2026 05:16AM

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