Michelle’s Reviews > The Will of the Many > Status Update

Naw this book is tooo long.

OUT WITH IT JAMES

While I like the concept, I strongly believe my man Mr. Islington could have cut down the writing by 40% by powering through with the plot and spending less time in this teenage boy’s head. The corruption in this dystopian society speaks for itself. Maybe he could also spend a little more time on the action sequences, bc the random thesaurus words fly over my head and all of a sudden he’s on the ground ? Explain pls