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Eugh that's the worst kind of Zionist take on the diaspora

Hey author if you feel guilty about enjoying porn you can just say that instead of writing a whole weirdly preachy book about it

Yeah called that

Shuli is starting to piss me off lmao

Just depend wholeheartedly on Yom Kippur you weird asshole

Idk man it just feels kinda

It's definitely trying too hard

The whole book feels like it's trying too hard

Part 1 feels relatively unnecessary to the story given the very extreme shift

I just feel like there's a place between secular and ultra orthodox that this is missing and it feels deeply strange that Larry went from secular and bitter to wholly ultra orthodox out of nowhere

This part came out of nowhere and feels very jarring