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hunter is on page 32 of 352
so… only got 32 pages into this during my shift 😭 i think what’s tripping me up is that the narration shifts between third and first person in the same sentence without any breaks. “Carlotta closed her eyes and braced herself I hope I could keep from punching out her fuckin pea brain”. that’s how it’s written… i gotta really slow down and figure out who’s talking
Feb 17, 2026 10:08PM
Didn't Nobody Give a Shit What Happened to Carlotta

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Lex My favourite book switches between the first and third person sentence to sentence but...it flows. I don't think I could deal with whatever this is.


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