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This feels like a bad mash up of hunger games and fourth wind. So far there has been no dragons, just boot camp.
There are some mc’s that keep calling the fmc “chubby” all the time. Her only defense is to ignore them instead of standing up for herself like she does with everyone else. These are adult men calling her names. I do not know any adult that behaves this way. Immature writing just for drama.
— Feb 25, 2026 08:31PM
There are some mc’s that keep calling the fmc “chubby” all the time. Her only defense is to ignore them instead of standing up for herself like she does with everyone else. These are adult men calling her names. I do not know any adult that behaves this way. Immature writing just for drama.
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