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hunter
is on page 156 of 247
not sure if this is sloppy writing or if the author is purposely showcasing the fmc’s lack of time awareness, but years two through six are wrapped up within 40 pages. does it feel like 4 years have passed to her or have 4 years actually passed? if it’s the latter, it’s poor writing bc we don’t get to stick with the fmc for long in that time
— Mar 03, 2026 03:56PM
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hunter
is on page 75 of 247
he wants her to be a dog for 8 hours every day?? that’s a full time job bro (listening to crank by slayyyter is enhancing this experience)
— Mar 02, 2026 12:49AM
hunter
is on page 55 of 247
ok.. so i see what people are saying. the way it’s written is so overly descriptive for no reason. at first i attributed it to the character’s ocd but i was wrong lol. it’s either written (partially or all) by ai or by a high schooler in a creative writing class
— Feb 25, 2026 09:45PM
hunter
is starting
alright let’s see if this is really ai slop like everyone says it is
— Feb 25, 2026 02:52PM
