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“But he was kidnapped suddenly by sleep and seemed to make a willing hostage.”

and the whole hospital sequence

“The world had rearranged itself around this new core. It had to. Without him, life would not be possible. He was on the inside and all else looked in.”

one positive point is this is authentic and enjoyable writing, like true oxygen compared to the toxic carbon that is AI

“She longed (…) to wear this suffering”
man nazneen i hate you

the tattoo lady briefly appears as a mirror of the protagonist’s passivity

otherwise this woman is just about my worst nightmare

“the baby sucked softly on her neck (…) Raqib was like shondesh, creamy and sweet, and perfectly edible.”
sinon what the fuck guys