Amy Long’s Reviews > His Reclaimed Luna : A Second Chance Rejected Mate Shifter Romance > Status Update

The timeline is so off. Ethan says he gave away his mate 6 years ago, but it doesn’t add up…
She left pregnant so 9 months plus 730 days. Then 6 months until he found her. Thats a total of 3 years so far. Are we to believe he stayed there for 3 years trying to win her back? But no, Alaric even said he was only gone 6 months.

He says that they took Ash on day 692, but that’s not true because she only started counting after she gave birth. And he took Ash when he was only 4 days old. She left a week or 2 after day 730. Day 730 was the last she could keep record of before they chained her up.

The baker needed a healer… and suddenly she has healer magic that’s been there since she was a child?! WTH?

If you’re going to move the book from an app that’s one chapter at a time onto Kindle, why not edit the inconsistencies… the complete flip between chapter 8 & 9 is nuts.

They’ve only been gone 6 months and supposedly Ethan, Elijah’s twin, looks like the man who was Ash’s father. But there’s not a hint of recognition? It would be a good way for Ember to be afraid of Ethan as well… Elijah did hurt her mother many times after all.

I’m confused why no one noticed Ash was gone…
Confused why Ash went with her when he was scared of her.