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Ember L.
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For the love of god who the fuck was this guy’s editor?! This description of the room he’s in MAKES NO SENSE. I can’t even begin to picture this. It’s a long hall 12 ft wide…but there’s a railing “along the wall” to keep him from falling into a chasm. I thought there was a wall there? And how can you be on the upper floor of a building if there are floors above you “further than the eye can see?”
— 11 hours, 45 min ago
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Ember L.
is on page 11 of 108
We’ve already had several grammatical/punctuation errors and maybe that’s petty, but that irritates the fuck out of me. Where was this guy’s editor? Really interesting how there’s only 5 people in this demon’s office, he gets rid of two of them, and then somehow “one by one people disappeared, some begging, some silent,” until they got to the last guy. So…one silent person? One screaming person? Wtf
— 12 hours, 13 min ago
