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Ember L.
Ember L. is on page 35 of 108
The two great bookcases? You’ve already told us there are a great deal more than just two bookcases here, Mr. Peck. You meant the other side of the chasm.

I hate this book. Was the author 14 when he wrote it? I can see this being a DNF. Shame, because the idea of it is amazing and this was one I was impatient to read based on most of the reviews.
Mar 15, 2026 07:55AM
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Ember L.
Ember L. is on page 15 of 108
For the love of god who the fuck was this guy’s editor?! This description of the room he’s in MAKES NO SENSE. I can’t even begin to picture this. It’s a long hall 12 ft wide…but there’s a railing “along the wall” to keep him from falling into a chasm. I thought there was a wall there? And how can you be on the upper floor of a building if there are floors above you “further than the eye can see?”
Mar 11, 2026 07:16PM
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Ember L.
Ember L. is on page 11 of 108
We’ve already had several grammatical/punctuation errors and maybe that’s petty, but that irritates the fuck out of me. Where was this guy’s editor? Really interesting how there’s only 5 people in this demon’s office, he gets rid of two of them, and then somehow “one by one people disappeared, some begging, some silent,” until they got to the last guy. So…one silent person? One screaming person? Wtf
Mar 11, 2026 06:48PM
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