Peony’s Reviews > The Last Unicorn > Status Update

It has some good ideas though, and some nicely thoughtful 'truths' about life. But they're kind of disconnected, like you're walking through the psyches of normal, not particularly interesting real people, who sometimes have disconnected threads of wisdom.

Its the 4th wall breaks I don't like. It's a beautiful in aesthetics and premise, but it doesn't pull them off very well. The worldbuilding feels threadbare.

Its kinda getting better. Love the cat

Maybe its on the nose because its a childrens book..?

there's something awfully simple about the writing. I just...dont like it. it has one good gig, but its missing a lot

A little better, still disappointing