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About two woman have been introduced verses about 8 or 9 men… I don’t like those odds
— 2 hours, 22 min ago
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I mean this is the nicest way possible but I can tell this is an indie debut.
Repeated dialogue, about 15 minor characters more than we need and the way the prose feels almost like it’s describing shots in a film rather than the flow of a scene for a novel - all these things would be caught by a good editor.
— 15 minutes ago
Repeated dialogue, about 15 minor characters more than we need and the way the prose feels almost like it’s describing shots in a film rather than the flow of a scene for a novel - all these things would be caught by a good editor.
