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Mike
is 14% done
The premise and character ideas are extremely intriguing, and some of the initial banter among friends was very entertaining.
Yet, despite a whorl of interesting ideas - first-time virgin, man with very lacy secrets unveiled, months of yearning for each other - both the relationship chemistry and perhaps the physical intimacy in the first chapter was relatively flat for me, especially compared to the ideas.
— Mar 25, 2017 01:46PM
Yet, despite a whorl of interesting ideas - first-time virgin, man with very lacy secrets unveiled, months of yearning for each other - both the relationship chemistry and perhaps the physical intimacy in the first chapter was relatively flat for me, especially compared to the ideas.
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Mike
is 24% done
The premise and character ideas are extremely intriguing, and some of the initial banter among friends was very entertaining.
Yet, despite a whorl of interesting ideas - first-time virgin, man with very lacy secrets unveiled, months of yearning for each other - both the relationship chemistry and perhaps the physical intimacy in the first chapter was relatively flat for me, especially compared to the ideas.
— Mar 31, 2017 03:11PM
Yet, despite a whorl of interesting ideas - first-time virgin, man with very lacy secrets unveiled, months of yearning for each other - both the relationship chemistry and perhaps the physical intimacy in the first chapter was relatively flat for me, especially compared to the ideas.
