Terri’s Reviews > Three: Out of Focus / What He Left Behind / Hiatus > Status Update
Terri
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"Hiatus" - Good, maybe includes too much of the tedium stubborn shits cause when they won't seek mental illness treatment, but for anyone confronting such symptoms? Hella informative. Also, SO MANY repeated lines, reiterating for no good reason. Needs editing out. But, I loved the end. So much.
— Mar 27, 2017 07:03PM
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Terri
is 40% done
Finished "Out Of Focus" - while bits of this novel were repetitive, the concerns of Jordan as the third to an established couple is, in polyamory circles, a topic just as important as it's laid out in the story. No one wants to feel expendable. Theirs is a true triad, love in all directions. Loved it.
— Mar 24, 2017 07:32PM
