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Amber
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Okay then, that's...why are the Turnbills not the ones punished then and technically it was not her blood that made the bargain, so that should mean something as well. This just feels like we're being dragged from scene to scene with little fluidity.
— May 13, 2026 01:14AM
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Amber
is on page 305 of 448
Um...there is a lot missing in these later chapters. Jumping straight into information and not how we came across it. And I thought we weren't supposed to tell anyone else...
— May 14, 2026 01:13AM
Amber
is on page 192 of 448
Then why bother with those first 150 pages then? They didn't matter.
— May 13, 2026 12:44AM
Amber
is on page 150 of 448
Okay then...also very anticlimactic--I feel like we've learned nothing and we're 150 pages in.
— May 12, 2026 10:49PM

