Amber’s Reviews > The Fox Hunt > Status Update

I...this has just no...fluidity.

Uh...okay, I guess...

Um...there is a lot missing in these later chapters. Jumping straight into information and not how we came across it. And I thought we weren't supposed to tell anyone else...

I was kidding when I said Robin Hood. KIDDING

Okay then, that's...why are the Turnbills not the ones punished then and technically it was not her blood that made the bargain, so that should mean something as well. This just feels like we're being dragged from scene to scene with little fluidity.

Then why bother with those first 150 pages then? They didn't matter.

Okay then...also very anticlimactic--I feel like we've learned nothing and we're 150 pages in.