Colleen’s Reviews > Lázár > Status Update

I don't really know how I got this far. The chapters are short which usually is not a problem, but the text changes points of view quickly without establishing tension or character motivation. There have also been several points where I have stopped reading because a name/topic will be mentioned and it seems as though it's not the 1st mention of said name/topic - but it always is the 1st mention. Translation issue?