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is 49% done
Like, seriously... the font size on my Kindle is set pretty small and still, I keep having to swipe through 5 or 6 pages (!!!) between one line of dialogue and the next! If I *wasn't* skimming past all the filler, there's no effing way I'd be able to follow the actual conversation 🙄
— May 31, 2026 02:26PM
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is 45% done
Am I enjoying this sequel? Yes. But am I also skimming past pages and pages and pages of Jax's internalized self-flaggelation, which slows down the pacing and adds nothing to the actual story? Also yes.
— May 31, 2026 02:18PM
