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Fiona Carder
is 47% done
My confusion with this chapter did not get any better. In fact, I’m pretty sure it got worse. I feel like the author just isn’t that good at writing fast paced scenes. A lot is happening, but it is inadequately explained making it very difficult to situate the characters. Hollis was suddenly not there, but we didn’t see him leave. Alo is suddenly in a different part of the cave. I’m very lost.
— Jun 02, 2026 04:29PM
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Fiona Carder
is 85% done
The world as they know it is ending and bro’s making table sex jokes
— Sep 19, 2026 02:50AM
Fiona Carder
is 74% done
The whiplash this books gives you between interesting worldbuilding and clumsy writing is insane.
— Jul 10, 2026 03:05AM
Fiona Carder
is 56% done
Hollis be like: (Courtney Miller impression) “I’m so sore from creating my own path.” 😩
‘Woe is me’ much. The way I literally don’t care.
Straight up- get a job dude and stop leaching off your sister.
Also this whole convo had me tripping. We are getting pay off to things that were never established or built upon leaving the reveal hollow and non-sequitur.
— Jun 16, 2026 11:47PM
‘Woe is me’ much. The way I literally don’t care.
Straight up- get a job dude and stop leaching off your sister.
Also this whole convo had me tripping. We are getting pay off to things that were never established or built upon leaving the reveal hollow and non-sequitur.
Fiona Carder
is 51% done
Ah yes- the well known Dutch/German/Swedish mixed language
Might throw some Danish in there as well for good measure.
— Jun 06, 2026 09:26PM
Might throw some Danish in there as well for good measure.
Fiona Carder
is 45% done
The writing in certain scenes is a bit clumsy. It makes understanding what is actually happening difficult- it’s happened a few times now. It feels like the author knows what is happening but doesn’t know how to properly translate that to the reader- like we’re going from A to C and there’s information missing. Where did the wizard come from? Why is he here? Did he follow them? Why? He’s just there suddenly
— May 06, 2026 05:51PM
Fiona Carder
is 41% done
We’ve reached ‘one bed’ trope levels 😞
While Alo is a fantastic character, Hollis still has the personality of a pencil shaving, but okay.
— May 02, 2026 05:45PM
While Alo is a fantastic character, Hollis still has the personality of a pencil shaving, but okay.