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“You know, Rune,” she said sharply, “for someone who claims to be all-powerful, you’d think you could conjure up something more exciting than a hole in the ground.” “It’s not a hole. It’s a lair.”
More of this, please!
— Jun 05, 2026 10:58AM
More of this, please!
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Haha holy cannoli... This would have been an amazing cliffhanger had she made this a duology instead of one big book (thankfully she did not).
— Jun 05, 2026 05:22PM
Alex
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I'm enjoying this overall (as I did the previous book) but I wish she had an editor do a second pass. There are a lot of errors in action - for example, the FMC was given "her mother’s tattered journal, the golden harp, the little cornsilk doll..." and then not even two paragraphs later she laments the loss of her mother's comb: "It was all she had left of her mother...".
Well, no baby, you have her journal.
— Jun 05, 2026 10:19AM
Well, no baby, you have her journal.