Joseph’s Reviews > The Trials of Renegade X > Status Update

Four people on this page have electric powers. Come on, people, show some variety, like Dodici and El Whinestro.

(I do not know what this list is about.)

Isn't this show for little kids? I feel like this message should be more kid-friendly. Otherwise release it on Youtube or go on a podcast or something. There's gotta be superhero podcasts in this world, right?

This is really interesting in light of Riley's poster. Does he think his father is the "correct" answer about heroism, even if he disagrees? Does he think his dad's death was heroic even if he doesn't feel that way? Much to consider.

Why can't Kat just shapeshift into a bird or something and fly up there with him?

I feel like Campbell is really sleeping on the potentials of Kat's powers.

"You went to Heroesworth because you wanted to belong? You expect me to believe that?"

To be fair, I don't. Gordon makes good points, if Damien was actually desperate to fit in as a hero, you think he would make...any sort of effort...to do that. At all.

"And there's only one person I know of who might be able to get me out of this."

The answer is apparently Riley, but like, couldn't Kat shapeshift into something to get through the lasers?

Did it occur to Damien to warn Kat about Sarah being crazily angry about her? Because even if you didn't realize she was dangerous (which you should have), like, she was bound to be bitchy and possibly make a big scene about it. You seemed to be banking on it, so that Riley would realize she was still messed up. But we're just not gonna address whether Damien let Kat in on this plan?

You know, this bathing-suit-while-wreathed-in-lightning look? Make your hero/villain name "Electric Eel" or something and I think it could work.

You know, we keep emphasizing that Sarah abandoned Riley...but you girlfriend, abandoned you, too, Damien. Are we seriously not going to address that? At all?

("But Damien wasn't in danger." Her dad tried to throw him off a roof! Oh, he wasn't REALLY gonna do it? So I guess it just counts as torture, not actual murder, then.)

"And no, I don't think Sarah will understand, no matter how grateful you are!"

I know you're doing a bit, but be serious, Sarah would be totally into this.