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Laroc
is 59% done
Try #2 but MCs are too childish no real chemistry just insta-lust. Mmc is pursuing FMC because he feels bad for not taking her v because he’s hung up on Hannah. Then him becoming bffs with the guy she goes on a date with just not my kind of mmc. So I’ll just stop here. Don’t care not my thing. The end
— Jun 11, 2026 08:08PM
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Laroc
is 6% done
I know their frontal lobes haven’t fully developed yet but the characters were too juvenile for me. And mmc turned me off almost immediately so it’s over for this one
— Jul 10, 2025 06:03PM
Laroc
is 6% done
Typically, but the author goes into way too much detail hooking up with 5 girls in 4 days gross. Then when FMC meets him he was just messing around with a girl in the bathroom at a frat party. And she said rather than be grossed out she is jealous of this girl. Just weird vibes. And FMC has the audacity to still be a v at oh no 18.
— Jul 10, 2025 06:02PM
Laroc
is 6% done
Yea this is gonna be a no. Sometimes I wonder if this author even wants me to like the characters she writes. Mmc is hung up on FMC from book 1 (which I liked) like boy is down bad and now I wanna go read the first again to see if I missed more to their dynamic. As for mmc personality he sucked. Yea he’s a manwhore which I don’t mind
— Jul 10, 2025 05:59PM
