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This is one example of HOW this doesn’t make any sense !! Deep logical flaws that go against common sense [ red flag ] >>
“… the ton remembered what the ton had witnessed last winter: a tradesman’s son paying court at Netherfield, disappearing without explanation, his sisters calling nowhere near Gracechurch Street despite Jane’s visit, and now this same man reappearing at Jane’s elbow…”
— Jun 14, 2026 08:27AM
“… the ton remembered what the ton had witnessed last winter: a tradesman’s son paying court at Netherfield, disappearing without explanation, his sisters calling nowhere near Gracechurch Street despite Jane’s visit, and now this same man reappearing at Jane’s elbow…”
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There is a big ball in London, one minute Elizabeth is a coveted heiress chased by every matchmaking mama with an eligible son, the next she is back to country nobody from Hertfordshire and “the ton” seems to know ALL about her wild walks about the countryside, her muddy hems, and her young sisters’ behavior (who are still back at home and haven’t met these people at all !)
— Jun 15, 2026 08:38AM
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This story seriously doesn’t make any sense !!!
A rich London Lady leaves an “inheritance” to Elizabeth *very randomly*, but it’s not really an inheritance because the Lady is still alive (??), so while she has never meet Lizzy, she is giving away her home (in which she still lives in) to a random girl from Hertfordshire PLUS £15,000 per annum — right!
Sentences make no sense, many weird literary turns
— Jun 13, 2026 03:29PM
A rich London Lady leaves an “inheritance” to Elizabeth *very randomly*, but it’s not really an inheritance because the Lady is still alive (??), so while she has never meet Lizzy, she is giving away her home (in which she still lives in) to a random girl from Hertfordshire PLUS £15,000 per annum — right!
Sentences make no sense, many weird literary turns
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Jun 14, 2026 11:37AM
This author boasts of her use of AI. She has even published a book on how to write fiction using AI. I avoid her like the plague. I read one of her first P&P variations, and it was completely nonsensical. I will never read another by her,
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I am perplexed !! I have read nonsense before, and we have all seen the formulaic sentence structure… but this goes above & beyond — I am mesmerized !
