NWil’s Reviews > Captive in the Underworld > Status Update

Meh conclusion. 2*

Figured out the problem with this book. Persephone’s character and her relationship with Hades isn’t developed on page beyond the initial period where she’s an unwilling captive being abused by Hades. Feels like the author enjoyed writing her non con scenes then ran out of steam for the rest of the book. So when Persephone returns to Demeter it’s like no time has passed and reverts to her childish self.

Book fell off after the first half. Not funny or particularly interesting. Persephone’s relationship with Demeter is very immature given her underground experience. Sigh. Good first half though. Need to finish this. Solid 2*

Noooo! Flogging?!?! 100 strokes?!?! 😂😭😂😂 Who is this audience for this shit??? I’m dying. This is comedy I swear.

What in the Khal Drogo and Danaerys am I reading fogosake???

Wait wait wait. Is this like deity erotica?? I’m dead 😭😂😭😂😭

Hades should be arrested immediately!!

Also the narrator of this audiobook ain’t doing the book any Favours if this is supposed to dark erotica. It just ends up sounding like reading the morning paper. Which is incredibly funny given what she’s reading. Hilarious!

Lolol. This is just kink play. Alright. I know the audience. Still fucking funny though. Both characters are criminally hilarious.

Also this isn’t dub con. This is non con. It’s gross. Sorry. I can’t engage with this at all.

Three fingers and a strap on her first time?? 😂😂😂😂 Who’s the audience for this shit? I’m dying of laughter! I guess it’s because they’re gods. Also, beyond the DV, none of this is particularly hot. It’s cringe and funny. Hades is clearly utterly unserious. As is the author frankly.

Why does she keep socking her in the face?? This is funny 😭😭