Rose’s Reviews > The Ballad of Jacquotte Delahaye > Status Update

I’m liking the story but the author struggles keeping scenes coherent, there are inconsistencies within scenes, especially the fight scene with the governor, that make it hard to follow. Like Florian getting toppled head first onto the floor by Marceau but then Jacquotte sees a shadow behind Marceau and it’s… Florian. So is he on the floor or not? It’s very clunky and awkward.