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Stormey
is 48% done
I can usually overlook grammatical errors in self published books, but this is next level.
Using the wrong 'your', using past tense words in present tense, using long sentences that should be broken up OR commas in places that make no sense. When sentence structure is bad my brain stutters and has to go back to figure out what it should say. That is TERRIBLE writing. It's making me dislike the whole story
— Jun 30, 2026 12:47PM
Using the wrong 'your', using past tense words in present tense, using long sentences that should be broken up OR commas in places that make no sense. When sentence structure is bad my brain stutters and has to go back to figure out what it should say. That is TERRIBLE writing. It's making me dislike the whole story
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Stormey
is 87% done
I am in the worst slump I cannot finish anything I'm getting so bored or I catch the ick and then can't like it.
This book is both boring and the writing has given me the ick, I'll probably finish it eventually because otherwise I wasted those hours reading for it to not even count as a completed book, but ill do it another day when I can handle torturing my poor eyeballs
— Jul 03, 2026 03:57AM
This book is both boring and the writing has given me the ick, I'll probably finish it eventually because otherwise I wasted those hours reading for it to not even count as a completed book, but ill do it another day when I can handle torturing my poor eyeballs