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Matilde Mazzocchi
is on page 160 of 576
very confused. world building: confusing. main plot line: confusing. where are the dragons? to many characters. feels like a mixture of crescent city and throne of glass. help
— Jul 02, 2026 03:00PM
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Matilde Mazzocchi
is on page 475 of 576
okay so my second to last update would have been like that meme of the dude mining and stopping right before he’d have found the diamonds, don’t get me wrong, this book still has SEVERAL flaws but it’s not as bad as i thought.
— Jul 06, 2026 04:01PM
Matilde Mazzocchi
is on page 294 of 576
waaaaiiiit this is actually a good twist (i understand what’s happening because i read the family tree at the end)
— Jul 05, 2026 03:02PM
Matilde Mazzocchi
is on page 258 of 576
i’m more confused than i was 100 pages ago: the plot doesn’t really make sense, the objective is unclear, i thought it was supposed to be about dragons but there’s barely any and i don’t really understand the “enemy” part of the enemies-to-lovers, there doesn’t really seem to be a good reason for them to hate each other. plus, the style is too pretentious and trying too hard. i’m struggling.
— Jul 05, 2026 02:20PM