EJ Kellerhals’s Reviews > On Earth We're Briefly Gorgeous > Status Update

i can’t handle this anymore. the staccato of the narrator (the author) is annoying. the in depth explanation of tiny details that don’t matter make it apparent that the author is trying to make it seem much better than it is. the story has potential but the way it was executed completely ruined it.

maybe i’m just stupid but i don’t enjoy over-descriptive language it’s too much, i get lost in it and forget the context