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EJ Kellerhals
EJ Kellerhals is 51% done
i can’t handle this anymore. the staccato of the narrator (the author) is annoying. the in depth explanation of tiny details that don’t matter make it apparent that the author is trying to make it seem much better than it is. the story has potential but the way it was executed completely ruined it.
Jul 05, 2026 10:01AM
On Earth We're Briefly Gorgeous

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EJ Kellerhals
EJ Kellerhals is 41% done
i just want this to be over tbh
Jul 05, 2026 07:14AM
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EJ Kellerhals
EJ Kellerhals is 29% done
maybe i’m just stupid but i don’t enjoy over-descriptive language it’s too much, i get lost in it and forget the context
Jul 05, 2026 05:17AM
On Earth We're Briefly Gorgeous


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