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That catfight in the florist’s shop made Anne look like an asshole along with the lady she was chewing out. All the brand name dropping is stilted and awkward. I really loved LOSER OF THE YEAR but this seems like it was written by someone else. I like that the women are older, but I don’t know that I like it enough to put up with Anne’s bad personality for a whole book
Jul 14, 2026 10:22AM
The Second Draft

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