Mia’s Reviews > Nightshade Academy > Status Update
Mia
is 33% done
Not sure how I’m feeling about this one tbh. The concept is there and the prologue was good but the characters feel a little empty. Lines like “”Quax spoke ill of me,” Yahshi said.” Feel so forced and don’t match how the character usually communicate and character growth is just as forced/snappy. Definitely reads like someone’s first novel
— Jul 19, 2026 05:07PM
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Mia
is 55% done
The writing in this has gotten considerably better and I’m enjoying it much more than when I first started
— Jul 25, 2026 08:47PM
Mia
is 17% done
Really struggling to remember who is who. The characters aren’t all that distinct in personality or voice. Even the main character’s name is lost on me
— Jul 12, 2026 09:07PM