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why are we describing children so weirdly some examples are: strangely precocious and sly yet beautiful eyes. if the case is literally about child predators, maybe we should make the "good" people investigating this crime not describe children in this way? or even, not make your writing itself describe children like... that?
— Jul 27, 2026 09:46AM
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But being mentally old and physically young set his emotional and physiological desires at odds. If this continues, Luo Wenzhou thought wildly, God knows when I’ll start getting hard at the sight of Luo Yiguo’s fluffy tail.
he's talking about his FUCKING CAT what messed-up shit is this
— Jul 28, 2026 04:46PM
he's talking about his FUCKING CAT what messed-up shit is this
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will continue because think i'll be more invested in this arc (because of how sad it probably is), i want to find out fei du's past, and see how all the cases connect. if this volume doesn't impress me, probably dropping this danmei.
— Jul 27, 2026 07:56AM
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Jul 27, 2026 09:58AM
I think that might be primarily due to translation although i agree such a valid point
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Sarra wrote: "I think that might be primarily due to translation although i agree such a valid point"i get where you are coming from but, also think this might be a case of near word-to-word translation because, if the translators made sure to include a slur in the first volume 💀 then, i wouldn't assume they were doing translation changes for other stuff

