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Madly Jane
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Well, there is a shocking lack of interiority, all action, hardly a sequel in the book. It doesn't get interesting until page 100, but after that, it's highly readable. Mainly because there is the bad boy Rorrick, and everything he does is interesting.
— Jul 31, 2026 10:32PM
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Madly Jane
is on page 420 of 423
That was a wild, messy ride, but I am eager to read book 2 and have pre-ordered it.
— Aug 01, 2026 09:48AM
Madly Jane
is on page 20 of 423
This is a learning project read that I share with other writers, so I am doing something new. I am line editing with comments to share, and it will be daily until I finish. chapter 1 is very good. I felt it lacked interiority which is difficult to do in present tense but not impossible. But I really loved the opening. What she faced in Chap 2 was more characters. Perhaps more telling than showing wld be better.
— Jul 28, 2026 12:48PM