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Laroc
is 75% done
I really tried with this but the writing is rough and there are so many plot holes. Like didn’t mmc kill FMC dad and brother. I guess they were mean to her but give us some detail or else it’s hard for me to see her being able to see past that. Also MCs are apparently in love already based on crushes they had from one interaction.
— Aug 04, 2026 08:14PM
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Laroc
is 75% done
Plus mmc treats FMC horrible and she still silently begs for him to want her. Also is mmc black? The description of him gave me nothing. Then the whole secret identity because of contacts a face mask and tattoo covering makeup. Like girl?! It just was painful at times. And not that I say this often but there was too much spice. I needed more depth. This was like a first draft
— Aug 04, 2026 08:17PM